mercredi, août 17, 2005

Hide and Seek

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Would it spell danger to travel
the land of young trees?
A child without its teeth
gnawing on the virile branches rich with sap;
Her little chest barely covering
the carvings of names on a peeling bark.
She would never know her name
nor the extent of her generosity.
Her hands would grasp the end of the branch
like the hollow opening on a conch,
her eyes would close, full of curiosity
enamored by the scent of grass and seas.
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Beyond the grasslands are the plains,
a place where the wind had sown her impurities.
It reminds her of a young boy,
the earth as flat and as smooth as his own abdomen.
Not so much as a tongue can distinguish its graininess,
nor the creatures that come out in the evenings
once the heat of the soils lose their intimacy.
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Something had grown here once before.
An ocean perhaps, with creatures as silent and frisky
as the children who played hide and seek
far beyond the shadow of the growing trees.
She used to love and used to get hurt, playing and losing
and finding each other in the wilderness of water.
Their names had been etched by other lost children
on the shores sifted by the anxious tides.
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Each game is playing and losing and finding each other.
At the time the boy becomes a young man,
he discovers something that grows within himself
the need to hide and seek for the young woman.
And at the time the girl becomes a young woman,
she discovers something that grows within herself
a gnawing distaste for awareness.
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6 Truths:

Blogger {illyria}in a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

your poetry is still as precious as ever. maybe i need to go back to my roots. write some semblance of a verse. or something.

mercredi, août 17, 2005 3:57:00 PM  
Blogger slim whalein a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

i always get high whenever i read your poetry.

mercredi, août 17, 2005 7:30:00 PM  
Blogger ennuiin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

transience - you don't have to. you get so much praise with what you're doing now.

the goddess walks among us ... and she wears her mother's bruno maglis. Ü


anonymous - MEOW!

slim whale - thanks. that's probably the best compliment i've heard about my poetry. it makes my heart soar Ü

mercredi, août 17, 2005 11:39:00 PM  
Blogger bismuthin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

why is everyone torturing me about the idea of longing? i love this ennui. and i'm not even in the mood for love right now. we should have tea soon.

vendredi, août 19, 2005 4:14:00 PM  
Blogger EGO SVM CAROLVSin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

I had to hold my breath while reading your poem. I wish we could do the same with time, hold on to the the things, people, places that make the heart skip a beat.

vendredi, août 19, 2005 11:36:00 PM  
Blogger ennuiin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

bismuth - torturing u? let me at 'em! u shd not be pushed into something you'renot in the mood for. it'll come on its own.

carolvs - but u can do that. u just have to work on a different time orientation. slow down, relax, smell the flowers, feel ur way thru unsorted memories ...

i do this all the time ;)

samedi, août 20, 2005 3:51:00 PM  

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