mardi, mai 03, 2005

Train Doors

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Just as they were about to board the train
two passengers kissed each other farewell.
It was insentient the way they held hands,
the sweetness and the heat combined
wearing thin like old paint on the bars.
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Perhaps it was not forever, this missing,

this lingering memory of a warm embrace.
The proximity could never be replaced
by the multitude of people crammed
behind the red demarcation on the floor.
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Perhaps this was not a bid of farewell

like a pair of punched out train tickets
swept away by the cleaning man's broom.
There was space left only for one,
the silent argument at a greater expanse.
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With a loud shrill, the door closes.

It is, a step back to being stangers.
Perhaps it doesn't matter to which side
this lingering memory of a kiss remains
when two people are divorced by train doors.
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5 Truths:

Blogger paningitin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

tains go in dark, damp tunnels. sorry. heh.

mercredi, mai 04, 2005 6:22:00 PM  
Blogger {illyria}in a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

i remember a scene in my life just like this...

mercredi, mai 04, 2005 10:21:00 PM  
Blogger Aleksuin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

Mesmerizing, thanks.

jeudi, mai 05, 2005 11:04:00 PM  
Blogger Russell CJ Duffyin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

there is a great deal of sadness about trains and departures captured so well in your poem. Thanks.

vendredi, mai 06, 2005 6:19:00 PM  
Blogger ennuiin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

jax - i don't know either.

paningit - hah, there are other things that go in dark, damp tunnels too. ;)

trans - really? what scene was this?

blex - Ü

cocaine jesus - thanks for the comment and thanks for dropping by Ü

vendredi, mai 06, 2005 11:42:00 PM  

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