lundi, avril 18, 2005

In the Passenger’s Case

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It was around 2:26 in the morning and the cab driver had not yet eaten dinner. On a holiday like that, it had been more difficult for him to find passengers all night. However, in a couple of minutes, on one of the well-lighted convenient stores he had passed by, a man with a large suitcase hailed him with an open hand. He rolled the passenger window down to inquire.
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“Where to?”
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“North pier,” the man said short-breathed, or it sounded like it coming from a small opening in the window.
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“Can you pay more to that? It’s a little far from here and you’ve got heavy load.”
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The man did not reply but he loaded the luggage in the back seat with much effort. He had a very earthen scent, as if he hadn’t taken a bath recently. The driver feared the car freshener would not suffice.
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After the door was shut, the driver got the meter going.
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30.00.
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Within a few seconds, they were back in the dark.
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“You going home to the province?” the driver inquired, assuming the man, like everyone else, was in a hurry to catch the last trip.
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“Yes,” was his brief reply.
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The man was staring anxiously outside the window, sitting uncomfortably to the right of the suitcase. He would glance on his watch every so often, then fidget his hand with which he kept the bag guarded. One cannot make out for certain, what he could have been preoccupied with. It became the driver’s way of knowing this would be another lifeless encounter with a stranger.
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The city was quiet, everything burnt yellow from where the light posts could sieve. For the driver, having lived in the area half his life, he could have been blind and still know his way around. The man behind the passenger seat only saw through the darkness.
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Everything seemed sleepy, except that the driver knew there was something amiss. He couldn’t quite point out what it was. During one of the stoplights, the driver looked up the mirror to check up on his passenger if he was awake. It would only take a minute or two before the red light turns green.
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To his surprise, the man was staring blankly at him from the windshield mirror. He couldn’t tell how long this had been going on.
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The man was missing his left eye.
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The driver kept his sights back on track, too disturbed by what he had witnessed. He still felt the uneasiness on his nape, he knew he was still being watched.
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Around 10 to 15 minutes past, with the ease of traffic, but with the unsettling calm, they were quite close to reaching the pier. He heard movement coming from the back seat, but he did not dare look up.
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“Don’t you get tired of your job?” the man spoke in a vacant tone, “driving around the city but not getting anywhere?”
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“No,” he replied after clearing his throat. “I’ve gotten used to this way of life,” he added politely. “Why ask? Where are you going to anyway?”
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“I’ve been in this city all my life, and even now, I’m stuck here,” the man replied, his white hair would turn yellow while they passed through another light post. “I’m not going anywhere.”
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He would check his watch again and fidget his hand with which he kept the bag guarded.
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“You should go on a vacation then. Maybe you need to see new surroundings, new places, new people. Do you have a family? What do you do for a living? …”
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The driver noticed the man was looking dead out the window again. He didn’t know if he pretended not to hear, but there was never a reply.
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“Where are you going?” he asked again politely.
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The man just kept silent. They were 3 stoplights away from the pier by now. The driver lit the signal light going right, the entrance to the North harbor.
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“Not there. Go to the one that’s closed,” the passenger spoke coldly.
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The cab took a sharp turn to the left from the right lane. It was a good thing there were no vehicles or people in sight. This place, after all, had been deserted for many years.
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The driver had become apprehensive. The man, physically, did not look like a criminal at all. He was old, slightly obese, his hair was white, his skin was dark and sun-dried, and he wore a faded scapular around his neck, which, to the driver, meant the man was Catholic. Still, he could not help worrying for his own safety. For all he knew, the man could’ve been carrying a suitcase full of explosives. It may have been illegal drugs or weapons. It could’ve been money. He imagined armed men hiding in the dark, waiting for a signal to come out. He thought this man might fear God, but not them.
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“There, beside the warehouse,” the man signaled with his hand.
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“Can I drop you off here instead?” the driver asked politely.
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“I can’t carry this bag all the way there. It’s too heavy.”
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The driver was silent. He needed a compromise.
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“Okay, I can drive you there but please, can you pay more for it?” asked the driver apprehensively.
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“Okay.”
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The cab rolled quietly through the dark, only the headlights paved the way. There wasn’t a car in sight, no people around. There weren’t even stray cats or mice. There were only 3 or 4 rusty-looking boats that looked abandoned. The place was lifeless.
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The man pulled up the car lock, which signaled the driver to slow down.
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“You can drop me off here,” the passenger said.
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He opened the door and tried to drag the suitcase out. It seemed very heavy indeed.
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“Please wait for me, I won’t take long. I just need to return this to them and I’ll get the money to pay you. I won’t take long,” the man said almost hurriedly. And in a few seconds, he was one with the darkness.
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The driver kept the lights on. He locked all the doors and kept his eyes closed. He was feeling every strand of hair on his body stand up. He scolded himself for having agreed to go there. He tried to convince himself the man would come back and pay him extra as he had promised. He felt he had no other choice anyway, it was a holiday and he had no luck getting by. It would only be a few minutes more he continued to tell himself. His eyes were shut but very restless.
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A few minutes went by. 5. 10. 20 minutes. 26 in total from the point he started counting. The man had still not returned. He started to worry.
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On the one hand, he felt frustrated having to drive all this way, having to wait this long and not get anything back. He felt it was a complete waste of time. Had he not picked the man up, he may have found someone else who wasn’t as eerie. On the other, he wanted to wait, he wanted to believe everything was in order; he just needed to be patient. He believed there was nothing wrong. He was stubborn and naïve like that.
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He suddenly felt the urge to urinate. He had been waiting a long time and he also needed to stretch. He turned off the lights; he turned off the engine and got out of the car. The sound of the water was soothing. The early morning air was chilly. He tried to look for a place to be relieved.
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Out of curiosity, he walked toward the warehouse. Everything was quiet and only the moonlight shown on its vast structure. There was a small gate to the center. It was slightly open.
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As he got closer, he was caught with a familiar scent. It was very earthen, almost putrid. He would smell it through the breeze on occasion.
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He continued walking closer to the entrance. He wanted to see more.
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From the slight opening, in the rusty gate, he caught sight of something that resembled a box. It was difficult to tell exactly what it was because it was very dark inside and the box didn’t look rectangular at all. It seemed overstuffed. There was what looked like oil all over the floor, black and thick, but all that occupied him still was the earthly smell of the air.
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And there on the inside, he realized, the box he had seen wasn’t really a box. It was a suitcase, the same one the passenger brought with him in the car. The driver was careful and checked to see if anyone was around. He couldn’t tell, except that it was a little too quiet. Something must have gone wrong with the deal, he assumed, and everyone left in a hurry. Perhaps they forgot about the suitcase. Perhaps whatever was in it is still in it, the driver mused.
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But, something reflected light, something metallic. It was a broken lock, one that had been attached to the suitcase earlier. It meant the case of the passenger had been opened.
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He lifted the unzipped flap to take a peak. It could have been money.
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As quickly as he let go of the cover, he was already out the gate, running as fast as he could. He was trembling so hard and his knees were almost giving way. His mind could not process well what he had seen, his face pale and unable to breathe well. The driver was near vomiting at this point.
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Urine was slowly trickling down his legs. He felt it, the warm water impeding his run. He could not help it, he kept remembering what he saw. The old man. His hair. It looked like his hair was torn out. He was squeezed into the bag like a fetus, except that, his parts weren’t arranged right. It was like, his body was cut up and haphazardly stacked inside. There was money scattered around with his clothes. They were soaking in his blood. At least that’s what he thought it was. It wasn’t oil on the floor all along.
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The man had lost, even his right eye. It had been jabbed with a screwdriver. He realized, it wasn’t a lock he saw on the floor, it was a ring. On a severed finger.
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He kept on running. Images came back, shot after shot. Wave after wave, splashing on the side of the dock. The putrid smell lingered. It was the smell of death.
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He was relieved to be back to his car. He could try to forget everything that had happened that night. He could, try.
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The lights on his car were on. It was so bright he could not see who was sitting in the passenger seat. He tried to sieve with his hand near his forehead. The engines began to rev. Soon, the tires were screeching and he realized his own cab was going at him. He ran the opposite direction, he, now utterly drained. He didn’t know where to run.
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But it was too late.
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Just as he reached the slender walkway leading to the boats, he felt his legs break from where his car had hit him from behind. His body was instantly thrown off into the dark space, the pain exacerbated as he landed face down on the hard water surface. He knew he would die, his legs would be of no use. Slowly his body sunk under water, the sound of the waves becoming less and less audible. His eyes burned with the salty water, and then he closed them unable to see anymore.
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The lights went off. They were not the car’s.
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9 Truths:

Blogger {illyria}in a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

jesus. thanks for topping my taxi post. tank tops pale in comparison to butchered passengers.

lundi, avril 18, 2005 3:11:00 AM  
Blogger r3dguyin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

.scary.!

u had me wait for more than one and a half hours for this?! my gosh, it was well, worth it. thanks for scaring me. Ü

lundi, avril 18, 2005 7:37:00 AM  
Blogger Aleksuin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

"The lights went off. It was not the car's."

I like this story a lot, thanks for sharing.

lundi, avril 18, 2005 10:23:00 PM  
Blogger ninjatoin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

wow, scary, although I must admit I kinda figured the guy to be some sort of a ghost, chilling description nonetheless, mad props

mardi, avril 19, 2005 1:23:00 AM  
Blogger Ingrid C.in a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

this is so francois ozon, without the homosexual undertone. hey maybe you could make the driver gay?

mardi, avril 19, 2005 8:22:00 AM  
Blogger bismuthin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

and you had to kill the driver?! argh! i need more chocolates.

mercredi, avril 20, 2005 10:25:00 AM  
Blogger paningitin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

i read this yesterday. and last night i couldn't sleep. i hate ghost stories.

mercredi, avril 20, 2005 11:26:00 AM  
Blogger priin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

Nice story. I love short terror tales like this one.

jeudi, avril 21, 2005 2:32:00 AM  
Blogger paningitin a hightened sense of self mumbled ...

ooga-booga!

lundi, avril 25, 2005 3:06:00 PM  

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