Smiling Halfway
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There can be so much sadness in a smile.
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Whatever this solitude brings forth,
it cannot be dealt with passively.
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In my mind I was embracing you against your will
caught up in the rapture of my silent restraint.
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ennui wrote the 1st faint line @ 4/02/2005 12:50:00 AM
9 Truths:
kiss you so hard i'll take your breath away
good lord, that was nice. can you make me poem? something about peeing halfway. thanks. :)
transience - actually, it's more like
i had a smile stretched from ear to ear see u walking down the road ... but every time i'm close to u there's too much i can say, and u just walk away ...
paningit - sure! why not! i'll post it on ur blog as soon as i can Ü
it's how your mild-mannered self always almost kisses that part of you which is ready to erupt that makes me wanna hug you.Ü needless to say, i loved this one.
Beautiful poem. Relating is definitely one of the most interesting and weird things going on this planet.
your silence is intimidating.
i gape in awe. and anyone who's hugged you knows how good it feels.
A smile that goes with a pair of eyes welling with pain is about the saddest thing one can see.
rain - mild-mannered? like clark kent? hahahaha
stan - thanks stan. it's so easy to relate yet difficult to connect. both interesting and weird.
mussolini - really? it's when i'm silent that i'm most vulnerable to myself.
bismuth - wish i were getting more hugs Ü
blex - truly it is :'(
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